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Writer’s Blog 2025-03-25

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Have you ever come to a realisation that you should have come to a long time ago? This happened to me recently. It was so simple that it really should have occurred to me earlier. It is this: Writing this blog should be a three step process. As realisations go it is not exactly ground breaking but it is true.

The three steps are:

  • Write the words. (I am using a Freewrite Alpha for this.)
  • Edit the words. (I use Google docs)
  • Put the words on to the site and make them look pretty.

Before I always picked a picture before typing. Sometimes this works but often my words go in a different direction and the picture is no longer relevant.

The other thing I am going to do is to try and limit myself to around 500 words. It is a more manageable length for you and for me.

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As mentioned above I am using a Freewrite alpha (not pictured) for the drafting stage. Here is a link if you want to get one: https://getfreewrite.com/products/alpha (Not sponsored and all that)

I bought the Alpha after my Freewrite Traveller gave up the ghost. It is wonderful to type on. The click-clack of the keys is very satisfying.

If you’ve followed that link, and seen the price, you might feel it is ridiculous. I get that completely. I did have to think for a long time about it. For me it makes sense as distraction is very easy.

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Anyone who has used the internet for research knows this problem. The rabbit warren, as they say. If you’re a writer I am sure you have had this happen. It goes like this…

Let’s say you have a Spanish character in your story. (I am picking Spain at random.) The character just needs a name. You want to be different. You don’t want to put another Lopez or Gonzaras in your story. So you google for Spanish names – it should be a simple matter just to pick one…

Then before you know it you have spent half an hour reading about a Spanish guitar play and bought two of her albums! (This specific example didn’t happen but I am sure you get the general idea.)

Unfortunately, when it comes to my internet distractions, I have never found something so interesting as a new piece of music. For me it is much more likely to just be a YouTube video – and one that I will have forgotten all about by the end of the day.

The new plan is still a work in progress. This draft has been going on for over a month!

I just wanted to say that I have checked this post. I really have. Unfortunately my particular combination of dyslexia and dyspraxia makes it really hard for me to spot typos. Please enjoy and I’ll try not to make too many errors.

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Writer’s Blog – 2024-01-19

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Have you ever heard about this silent room. Reportedly it is so quiet you can hear the blood moving in your head. I must admit I have often been curious what it might be like to be in such a room.

I find both silence and sound to be somewhat difficult to deal with – maybe it would be more accurate to say I am addicted to YouTube.

There is a tendency nowadays to fill all moments with sound. It could be music, the aforementioned YouTube, or even an audio book. I am aware that with the use of the word ‘nowadays’ I sound like an old man.

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As I am writing this now I have a YouTube video paused. When I finish this session I will unpause, listen for a little bit longer, and then pause again. Often that is how I operate over a day. I am sure it is not particularly effective.

Would silence be better?

I am not sure what it is about silence but it can be hard to deal with too. The funny thing is it is not even that I have too many thoughts. Mostly my mind is rather blank.

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It is said that the definition of insanity is doing the same thing again and again and expecting different results. I think that I have been embodying that for a while.

Breaking out of a bad habit can be hard. I suppose I am thinking about that now, in particular, as we get towards the end of the year. (Now we’ve started a new year. I started this on 2024-12-11)

New habits can be embarked on at any point, obviously, but there is something about a new year that makes it seem like it is the right time to do it.

On the other hand, ‘New Year’s resolutions’ are doomed to failure. It is an often repeated fact that such resolutions rarely make it out of January.

They say that the better thing to do is to set a general intention. I am not sure how to do that. To be more accurate I need to find the discipline to do it.

What I have found is that there are always impediments. The parts of my life out of my control sometimes lead to not being able to stick to a routine. I have set an intention to wake up at 0700 each day. However I sometimes have trouble sleeping. On those nights, if I don’t have to be up in the morning, I cancel my alarm, wake up late, and then the whole day is thrown off and I am back to square one.

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It is now January and this post is only just being completed. Maybe I should work on doing these in one go. Each time I come to it I write just a little more. Therefore it is long past time to wrap it up.

Lately, to help with being productive, I have been using dice. I write out a list, select a dice, and roll it down a dice tower to decide what I will do next. It makes choosing just a little more fun. So far so good.

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Writer’s Blog – 2024-11-04

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I often seem to say, even if only to myself, that I have a new plan. You might say a cunning plan. Unfortunately my cunning plans do tend to go other about as well as those invented by Baldirck.

In my drafts for this blog I have many unfinished posts. I sometimes struggle with articulating what I want to say. I have one that was started in late September. Since we are now in November (We were when I wrote this.) I think it is fair to say that that post is not going to work out.

The current cunning plan is a new do-to list book. I use a website called So Typical Me . This site allows you to design a diary, or note book, from the ground up. I designed one back in May but I have slowly started to realise I made a mistake.

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I miscalculated how much I could do in one week. Nature abhors a vacuum and so do I. I find I cannot leave blank spaces. If there is a line in the book I want to fill it. Therefore I have been setting myself too much to do in one week.

My new plan, elegant in its simplicity, is to have a notebook which doesn’t assign tasks to a specific day. If a piece of work can be done at any point then it can’t possibly be late can it?

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(2024-11-24) Since I started this post I have also purchased a standing desk. I have been thinking about doing it for quite some time and it arrived a couple of days ago. It is supposed to be better for you, it helps with the problems associated with sitting for too long, and I think I heard it helps you focus better.

So it may be that a new diary coupled with a standing desk will help me be more productive. It may also be that I am announcing another cunning plan a few days from now.
(It is now 2024-12-06. So far so good.)

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Writer’s Blog – 2024-09-09

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Sometimes, when writing, annoying questions come to my mind. I’ll be writing my story and everything seems to be going fine then, suddenly, I discover a plot hole.

Funnily enough this can come in the form of a character asking a question and then I have to deal with the question.

Plot holes are an almost inevitable part of writing. In the real world the unexplained can happen. In a story every part should have some value.

In 2008 my brother and I were in Paris. We saw an old man on the metro. He was a little scruffy looking and kept standing up, gesticulating, speaking quickly, and then sitting back down. I don’t speak French so I have no idea what he was saying. My impression, from the reactions of those around us, was that he was probably predicting the end of the world. (It could have be literally anything else.)

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In a film, or a book, including such an event would have to have some kind of point. Although I suppose, and I am defeating my own argument here, he could just be a curiosity in a wider adventure. I suppose it is more proper to say most things have to have a point.

The final episode of Buffy the Vampire Slayer season 4, Restless, takes place in a dream world. Everything in it has a meaning with one exception. A bold man offering slices of cheese. The meaning of this is that it is meaningless. The idea being that all dreams have elements of meaningless.

As an aside I have never been a fan of this episode. I like it as a piece of art but not as an episode of television. I shouldn’t have to know philosophy and ancient Greek just to understand something of this sort. Perhaps I am just an uncultured so-and-so.

As another aside my dreams are, I am fairly sure, completely meaningless. I once had a dream that someone sent me a living baby in the post. The dream me didn’t seem altogether surprised with this development. I just made sure the tiny baby was taken care off.

In my novel a group of centaurs are rescued from slavery. My astute, intelligent, and kind protagonist is going to ask awkward questions about this. She will want to know why more slaves aren’t rescued in the story. I have some ideas of how to answer but not a complete one. I think I will go with plan B…write the story and let reviewers, if reviews there be, come up with lore to explain my shortcomings.

I hope you are doing well. Thank you for reading my blog.

I just wanted to say that I have checked this post. I really have. Unfortunately my particular combination of dyslexia and dyspraxia makes it really hard for me to spot typos. Please enjoy and I’ll try not to make too many errors.

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The Devil in the Dark (TOS)

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This is one of my favourite episodes of TOS. I would go so far as to say this is one of the quintessential episodes. If someone asked me what Star Trek is about this is the perfect episode to show. It seems like a simple monster hunt story. However this is Star Trek. For the crew of the Enterprise life is rarely so simple.

The episode starts with someone other than our heroes. I don’t think we have seen that before. We are in a mine. The miners discuss a monster that has killed 50 people. One of them, Schmitter, is told he will be fine. He is killed not two seconds later. Specifically he is burnt to a crisp.

After the opening credits we get the captain’s log. The colony is Janus Six and they are mining pergium. Pergium is an element which is vital to the Federation. The Enterprise is tasked with finding and killing the monster in the tunnels – or the devil in the dark.

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The conversation between Kirk and Chief Engineer Vanderberg does have a bid of an ‘as you know’ problem but we do get information about the creature and its capabilities.

McCoy examines the body of Schmitter, from the beginning, and says that there isn’t much left. It is as though he had been thrown into a large vat of acid.

Spock notices a silicon nodule on Vanderberg’s desk. You can already see the cogs going in Spock’s brain like he is formulating ideas. I think he already has some notion that it might be important.

On the wall there are maps of the tunnels. I know it is petty to point it out but these maps just make me smile. This colony can’t afford to have maps on a computer just ones sticking out of the wall – like posters in a music shop.

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Down in the tunnels we have another hapless victim. After the attack we see the creature go through the wall as if it was air.

The creature takes the colony’s circulating pump. They don’t have a spare and without this device the reactors will explode.

Maybe it is just me but if I had a thing in my home that, if broken, would cause my house to explode I would probably have a back up for it.

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Naturally Kirk calls Scotty to see what he can do. The thing is the part is antiquated. Scotty says he hasn’t seen one in 20 years. This is a bit of a head scratcher. If the pergium from this world is so important why is it operating on such old equipment?

Nevertheless I love Scotty in this scene. His knowledge and expertise is expressed in such a nice way. Doohan really sells it that Scotty is an engineering expert and enthusiast.

The out of universe explanation is obvious. The need to recover the device gives the story a sense of urgency.

Incidentally, and slightly off topic, I have always found the idea of urgency in a story to be interesting. In a show like Star Trek we know our heroes are going to succeed – so the idea that they might not doesn’t always create a sense of jeopardy.

In this story the taking of the pump does serve another purpose. It proves the creature is intelligent and that it wants the colonist off the planet.

The big question is why now? The colony has been established for over 50 years. There is discussion here about the possibility of a silicon based life form. I am no scientist so I can’t comment on that. (I can’t even comment based on Trek science either.)

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The upshot is that the Enterprise crew have more powerful weapons and they might be able to affect the creature.

Spock is still fascinated by the silicon sphere. He is unwilling to be drawn on exaclty what it is.

Kirk talks to the security personnel. They are led by Lieutenant Commander Giotto. It is not outright stated but it would seem he is Enterprise’s chief of Security. Insistently this scene is quite meme-able as it is Kirk talking to a bunch of red shirts.

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Predictably it isn’t long before one of them buys the farm. Kirk and Spock are alerted by the scream.

I really enjoy the creature design in this episode. Science fiction is always at the mercy of its budget. The Horta design works because it is not humanoid. It is, at least in my book, much easier to suspend disbelief in this instant.

When Kirk and Spock shoot the creature they manage to hurt it. Spock declares the skin to be like ‘fibrous asbestos’ as he examines the piece they blew off.

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I want to go off on a slight tangent now if you’ll indulge me. Why is killing the creature considered acceptable to Kirk and Spock? Because they need the resources of this world. However previous episodes show that the Federation will not take from those that do not want to trade.

This has got me thinking about something I haven’t seen discussed before. When does the prime directive kick in?

In the episode Mirror, Mirror the Halkan’s refuse to trade with the Federation. For Kirk that is the end of the matter and his team departs.

In this episode killing a native creature is seen as acceptable. Here is my question… at what point does a creature become advanced enough that the prime directive affects them? I don’t have an answer to that question but I find the whole thing fascinating. We know that contacting pre-warp societies is a big no in trek. The question I have is what constitutes a society?

There are many animals on earth that live in reasonably sized groups and use tools. Would that count? If, for example, the Enterprise encountered a planet where the most intelligent life was orangutans could they visit? Based on what I know of this universe the answer is yes. So at what point does a species go from an animal we can exterminate to a civilisation we have to respect? I have no answer just food for thought.

In another briefing with the security men Spock tries to order that the creature be captured if possible. Kirk countermands the order restating that the creature must be killed. Again this seems like an odd thing for a starfleet officer to say.

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Kirk orders Spock to assist Scotty with his work around for the stolen part. Spock states that Scotty has far more knowledge of nuclear reactors than him. I like this because it shows how the Enterprise is really a team. It is all too easy, sometimes, to create the impression that most characters in an ensemble are just dead weight.

With the place likely to explode within 10 hours Kirk orders an evacuation. However Vanderberg, and some of his men, are staying behind to deal with the creature. When Kirk says they do not have enough phasers Vandenberg says they can use clubs.

Two things come to my mind when reading this. Firstly why does the Enterprise have so few phasers? Secondly is a club really going to be effective against this creature? Well, Kirk seems to think so and is quite happy to accept the help. (Perhaps he is thinking he will loose fewer of his own men.)

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The atmosphere of this episode is done very well. It is tense and you really feel the danger the crew are in.

Kirk and Spock separate, which never feels like a good idea, and Kirk finds a room full of the silicon nodules. Spock tells him to be sure he doesn’t damage any of the nodules. The nodules are eggs.

The creature approaches Kirk. This time it doesn’t make any overtly aggressive moves. It backs off when Kirk raises his weapon. Suddenly it is Spock who is saying to kill the creature. It is odd for Spock to advocate killing in any situation. Here though it is simply that Kirk’s life is in danger.

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Spock’s Vulcan abilities prove invaluable. He is able to make a telepathic link with the creature. He discovers that it is in terrible pain, from the phaser wound, and that it is called a Horta. The creature writes a message ‘No kill I’

In order for Spock to get more information he needs to mind meld with the Horta. Touching a creature with acid skin doesn’t seem like a good idea. My guess is that the Horta can control its secretions. Meanwhile Kirk orders McCoy down to the planet to help to heal the Horta.

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It is here that the full story comes together. The Horta has been defending its children. The attacks have only recently started because it is only now that the miners have reached the level of the ‘chamber of the ages’.

The Horta, through Spock, tells Kirk where to find the missing pump. The fact that the Horta didn’t just destroy it might suggest that she was open to some kind of accommodation.

Meanwhile Starfleet security proves, once again, that it is really lacking. The redshirts are overpowered by the miners.

There is a wonderful bit with Vanderberg. When he is informed that his people have killed thousands of Horta, by destroying the eggs, he is obviously bothered by it. I like this characterisation very much. He is more complex than this type of character often is. His men might have died but this changes the situation for him. Very well done.

By golly, Jim, I’m beginning to think I can cure a rainy day.
Doctor McCoy – The Devil in the Dark

The episode ends with them making a deal with the Horta. The Horta will be left alone to mine and the humans will extract the minerals. Interestingly it is mentioned that the miners are going to be very rich – so the idea of money being a thing of the past hasn’t come in yet. Actually I am not sure that it ever will in TOS.

This is one of the best episodes of the show and is certainly in my top 10. (Well probably I haven’t written that list just yet.)

I just wanted to say that I have checked this post. I really have. Unfortunately my particular combination of dyslexia and dyspraxia makes it really hard for me to spot typos. Please enjoy and I’ll try not to make too many errors.

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To Blog or Not to Blog

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Wow! Look at that stock picture. Sometimes you find exactly what you are looking for. Isn’t that special?

To blog or not to blog? That is the question I am asking myself today. I say today but it is more than just today given that the draft for this was started some time ago.

With an uninspired title like that it might be that not blogging is for the best. Still I am going to explore this topic.

A blog is the blogger putting their thoughts out into the universe. The real question is is the universe interested.

I’m entitled to my opinion.
It is your assumption that we are entitled to it as well that is irritating.

Vila & Avon Blake’s 7 (Bounty)

No one can do a put down quite like Avon. The internet is packed to the gills with people expressing their opinions and/or giving advice. After a while online it all starts to become overwhelming. I have even started to doubt my own opinion on things like TV, films and books. “Well GenericScienceFiction4247 doesn’t like this episode so maybe I am wrong.”

You are erratic. Conflicted. Disorganised. Every decision is debated, every action questioned, every individual entitled to their own small opinion. You lack harmony, cohesion, greatness. It will be your undoing.

Seven of Nine Tertiary Adjunct of Unimatrix 01: Star Trek: Voyager (Scorpion Part 2)

This post started out as me questioning if I should keep blogging. Now I am advocating for the Borg. Something has gone horribly wrong.

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The thing about blogging is that it is takes time and it has to be thought of in the context of when it is being posted.

Let’s say I wanted to tell you about the time I took a water pistol to school. That might be just a funny story. However if, on that day, there is some story about a kid doing the same for nefarious reasons my funny blog post becomes insensitive.

I did actually take a water pistol to school once. I don’t know how old I was. I think I was around 12-14. The reason was the school was having a fancy dress day. I went as James Bond. Mum spray painted a water pistol black – and to my eyes it looked like a Waltha PPK. And that is actually the end of the story because I have a memory like Swiss cheese.

Let’s imagine that I had more to say. I would sit at my computer, write a blog post, and be ready to hit the post button. Then I read the bad water pistol story. Suddenly it sounds like I am making light of a tragedy. (How there can be a tragedy involving a water pistol is another question entirely.)

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The point is that for blogging you have to be aware about stuff like this in a way you don’t, as much, for any other sort of internet content.

Every now and then, on Facebook, there is a post proposing a question. “Could you live without the internet for a month? At the end you get £1,000,000.”

Unfortunately no one is actually offering that. Nevertheless I have often wondered about my answer to that question. I think if I was allowed a good supply of books and DVDs it might not be so bad. This would especially be true if there were good places to go for walks. The only slight wrinkle is that there are some people I only talk to online. I would obviously have to make sure they knew I wasn’t just ignoring them.

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A lot of what I do online is the internet equivalent of eating sweets. I watch YouTube videos. Sometimes they may have a lasting impact but mostly they are enjoyable in the moment only.

I don’t even want to know how much time I spend on YouTube on a typical day.

Sometimes I have the following rather silly thought: ‘I can’t sit and watch TV because I should be being productive. In lieu of that I will watch YouTube. Therefore I will have a break of only 15 minutes instead of 45.’

Yeah that is a bad idea. What normally ends up happening is that I just spend those minutes (and more) on YouTube instead.

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At the beginning of the year I left my job. To say I had a plan might be playing fast and loose with the word. What is something that is a step down from a plan?

Anyway the “plan” was to focus on writing for a bit, finally get my novel finished, and find a way to earn money in a way that didn’t drive me completely mad. (That ship might have already sailed.)

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I have achieved a draft of my novel. It is incredibly rough and incoherent but it is something. I now need to pull together all the other drafts (I hate my past self) to make it work. There is just one small problem….

I don’t have a villain. Maybe that is more than a small problem. It is like trying to make onion bhajis without onion. Which I have attempted. No. I am not a complete idiot. What I mean is that I have set out with the intention to make bhajis only to discover I have all ingredients except for onions. My brain and I have a rather dysfunctional relationship.

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Do stories need a villain?

You will bow to my awesome power. There is nothing that can stop the destruction I bring upon you. Prepare to meet your doom.

Anubis (Stargate SG1: Redemption Part 1)

Actually Stargate is very good at this. The Goa’uld are literally described as ‘cliched bad guys’. Although that is mostly because it seems to be Colonel O’Neill’s favourite word.

Stargate SG-1 without the Goa’uld wouldn’t be quite the same. (Yes that was a dig at seasons 9 and 10… sorry.) SG-1 needs a villain so they can save the world at the end of each season. I don’t think a villain is always needed.

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When I first started my novel, a long time ago, there was a villain. He lived in a grand castle with his minions. The castle stood alone on a mountain. The heroes make a daring attack in the final chapter – and not all of them survive.

The villain in their fortress has been done many times. From Ming the Merciless, to Sauron, to a number of the Bond villains. It does work but what if my story needs something else?

One of the best episodes of Star Trek: The Next Generation is “The Defector”. This episode doesn’t end with a battle but it does have a villain. That villain is Tomalak played by the late great Andreas Katsulas.

The episode is tense. The Enterprise must determine if a Romulan defector is genuine or a ruse to start a war.

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At the end of the story the Enterprise is outgunned and all seems lost. Then we get the reveal. The Enterprise has Klingon reinforcements. What was a sure thing for the Romulans is now, at best, a Pyrrhic victory. Tomalak chooses to withdraw.

I look forward to our next meeting, Captain.

Tomalak (Star Trek: The Next Generation SG1: The Defector)

I am trying to stumble towards a point here. (Although I have written this over so many days I am not sure what it is.) Perhaps this blog does have a purpose in that it helps me to work out story possibilities.

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Fantasy novels often end with an epic battle. So in an effort to set myself apart I want to do something different. The question is what? Without a battle it might just be a bunch of connected ideas and nothing more.

I said at the top that I have a rough draft of my novel. I do. However this post has proven there are a huge number of kinks to work out. I

If nothing else I need to put barriers in the way of my heroes. Some writers like their characters to go through a series of horrible events. I am not so sure that is what I want. I also don’t want to end up with a red shirt problem. And I am not sure my novel is even that kind of story.

Thank you for staying with this rambling excuse for a blog post. Will there be more? Maybe. This is my first (Reviews notwithstanding) post in nine months! That is a long time. I think I will leave the final words to Homer Simpson.

…it’s just a bunch of stuff that happened.

Homer Simpson (The Simpsons: Blood Feud)

I just wanted to say that I have checked this post. I really have. Unfortunately my particular combination of dyslexia and dyspraxia makes it really hard for me to spot typos. Please enjoy and I’ll try not to make too many errors.

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Freewrite#3

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I am writing this in a coffee shop about 3 miles from home. (He said not being 100% sure how far.) Actually 4.4 kilometres which is actually 2.73 miles.

I walked here, in lieu of joining a gym, so as to get some exercise in my life. I keep coming back to that idea of joining a gym and then veering away from it again. Why would I want to join a gym? Well to try and make myself look…better. Honestly I do not find them especially fun places. They are loud and everyone else is always prettier than me!

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Walking here for a hot chocolate seems better. Even if that, and the food I had rather negates the effect of the exercise.

The point of the Freewrite was to not be distracted. So how is that going? Well I am distracted a bit. There is still my phone next to me. Aside from checking that distance information I am managing to stay away from it. There is the music my phone identifies as Mr Big Stuff (woops distracted again).

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Across from me is a woman with purple hair. She has her computer with her. It has a stylised cat on the top. You know the type pointed ears and intricate patterns for the fur.

I find myself wondering what she might be writing. Is it a university project? Is it a novel? Is it a poem? She could be self-employed and doing her taxes for all I know.

There are two women sitting across from each other reading. Together but separate. Enjoying each other’s company but also their own individual book.

At the table next to me are two women with laptops. If had to guess I would say all five are at university and have come here to study.

Do you ever people watch? It can be fascinating.

There is also an older couple in the far corner and a middle aged man on his own with a book.

I like using the Freewrite here. I think it is better than a full laptop. And I am not sitting around my usual home clutter.

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I am for sure making a few errors but that what editing is for.

Now that it is a week later and I am editing I can tell you there are many errors.

Writing about what I am writing is probably one of the sillier things I could be writing but it is all I have got.

The other day I wrote a piece for an article competition. I cannot share it with you here for that reason. I used the Freewrite and after a few false starts, because the competition could be on any subject, I got it done.

A new plan is emerging in my mind for this blog. 500 words a pieces. seems like a good amount.

I do actually have a couple of things I could be doing while I am here in town. The time is 1352 and I think I just hit the after noon slump.

I have so far walked 10,928 steps. I haven’t decided if I will walk home or not. The weather might decide that one for me.

(Spoiler alert: I did not walk home)

Well that is 500 words. So see you next time.

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Freewrite#2

After the ‘excitement’ of the first Freewrite the new one has now arrived and I am typing this entry on it.

Here it is in all its dusty glory – I have the housekeeping skills of a drunk gorilla

The first Freewrite was, of course, the second as the first was actually stolen and I never saw it. The difference between the one I had before and this one is night and day. The keys just work when I tap them – that might be the bare minimum one expects from a computer but that wasn’t even happening before so progress!

When I fist turned on the one I received I thought that it was just a weird machine and it would be a bit of a learning curve. I concluded that that was why letters seemed to be taking a while to appear. As it turned out it was the beginning of the problem that killed it.

This one, in the words of the ninth doctor, is fantastic. I saw a few reviews of it before I took the plunge that said that a Freewrite was slow and rather unresponsive – not in terms of a fault but because of the nature of e-ink. I am not finding that at all. I am typing at a normal speed and the letters are coming up like normal so I don’t see that.

The big question is will this device actually help me with writing? I think it probably will. When I am working on a blog post I often get bogged down in how it looks. By the time you read this there will be a picture and a nice layout. However trying to do two things at once, getting the words right and making in look good, means that I end up doing neither very well. Separating those two facets means both are done better.

That is not all. I am bad at spelling – a constant problem – and sometimes my spelling is so bad that even a spell checker doesn’t have a clue! And thus I am distracted with the wavy red lines under the words and stop writing to go and find the correct spelling. When my spelling is just that bad I go to plan B – which is rather ridicules.

Plan B is to find a TV, or movie, script that I know contains the word. So I look it up and copy and paste the word. I know it sounds crazy but it works. Minutiae is one such word I have trouble with. (Although this time my misspelling was close enough that I could get it without plan B.) Normal I have to seek out a Star Trek: Deep Space Nine script that contains the word. (And doing this can lead to the distraction of reading the script.)

The Freewrite doesn’t have a spellchecker so no distracting lines – it is just for writing. The Freewrite doesn’t even allow for editing. Technically you can use the back arrows but they require a keyboard shortcut, no dedicated keys, but this is a feature not a bug. The whole point of the device is that you just write and that is all and that is why I wanted it.

So far I am very happy with it and I think that it is going to help. Only time will tell if I am correct in that assertion.

I just wanted to say that I have checked this post. I really have. Unfortunately my particular combination of dyslexia and dyspraxia makes it really hard for me to spot typos. Please enjoy and I’ll try not to make too many errors.

PS. I have jumped over the festive period. So happiness to you for the coming year. May your dreams come true this year.

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Freewrite

Have you heard of the Freewrite TRAVELER? It is a dedicated writing machine. It uses e-ink and can do nothing more than write. I was hoping to be using it now to write this entry but I am unable to do this.

The first time I ordered one it didn’t arrive. The delivery company, who shall remain nameless, delivered an empty box. Then I got sent a replacement but the ‘e’, and a few other keys aren’t working. An ‘e’ is rather important to the English language.

So I am going to have to make a third attempt – fingers crossed!

I have thought about getting one of these devices for a while. It was the price that was stopping me. One of these is £344 which is a lot of money.

As many a reviewer points out a low end laptop can be bought for that. The question then becomes why pay more for something that does less?

What finally brought me to the decision was enforced productivity – and having a devise that is just for writing.

Will power is a good thing to have. However sometimes the best way to win is not to fight. Sun Tzu said something like that. So if you know that chocolate is too much to resist then don’t keep it in the house.

I shouldn’t keep chocolate in the house but that is a different story.

I am really bad at continuing to edit and thus never make any progress. I also get sucked into research. You know how it is. All you want to do is find the name of a city in Uzbekistan. Next thing you know you are down a rabbit hole reading about… well I am sorry I don’t know anything about the history of Uzbekistan.

The point is that distractions come in many forms. With a Freewrite the possibility of distraction is removed. I am not fighting against anything being distracted. I have no choice but to write.

That is the theory at least. When the fully functional device arrives hopefully the theory will hold.

I just wanted to say that I have checked this post. I really have. Unfortunately my particular combination of dyslexia and dyspraxia makes it really hard for me to spot typos. Please enjoy and I’ll try not to make too many errors.

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So Much to Know

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Sometimes when writing I find myself having to stop every few words to google something and that really doesn’t help with progress of the story. Also Google can only get you so far – there are some questions that can’t be answered so easily.

Captain, the most elementary and valuable statement in science, the beginning of wisdom, is, “I do not know”.

Mr Data (Star Trek: The Next Generation) Where Silence Has Lease

And not just science. Lack of understanding is also a problem. I wouldn’t say I was stupid but everyone has things they do not understand and since we are getting into some difficult topics you may want to stop reading now.

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I chose a mosque for the picture at the top owing to the direction one of my characters is going in. My character’s name is Tina. Her father is white British and her mother is Pakistani British.

Tina’s ethnicity has no baring on the plot. She could be from anywhere and very little would have to change. I have set the story in Cardiff, because that is where I happen to live, but other than her living in Cardiff anything else is possible.

Nevertheless it can’t be denied that her experience of Cardiff will be different from my own. In order to make her a believable character I need to ask important questions about religion. And the big question is: Does she believe in God?

I do not believe in God. If I decide that she does how do I write that?

I am going to try and discuss this with sensitivity and I apologies ahead of time if I mess up.

I can research Islam and start to build a character but real life is more complicated.

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Humans are diverse and that is true of every area. My grandmother was English and she liked tea. Whenever we would go to an adventure park…

(I can’t think of better collective noun. Places like gardens, museums, model railways, and so on. Basically I am talking about any place a family might go on a school holiday. I remember we went to a park in Cornwall, for example, that had sculptures of famous world landmarks.)

…her first priority was to go to the tearooms. In short she was the epitome of what might be expected from an English person. Of course not everyone in England, or the UK, likes tea.

By the same token not everyone of a particular religious faith follows every aspect of that faith. I have know some religious people who are very strict in some areas but in others they are not.

I do not mean this in a critical way and I don’t want to get into a ‘No true Scotsman’ argument here. And since religion is a topic that is difficult I am going to use a Star Trek metaphor.

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Star Trek: The Animated Series presents an interesting case study. Like religion Star Trek has its canon. And The Animated Series has a question mark over its status. Some say it is all canon, some say none of it is, and some…(this is the interesting part – almost worth waiting for)…say it is non-cannon apart from the episode Yesteryear. And Yesteryear has a mistake – it depicts Vulcan with a moon.

If you asked a large group of Star Trek fans about this you would get a variety of answers – of course the most likely response is: ‘Who are you? How did you get in here? And why are you asking irrelevant questions at three o’clock in the morning?’

I may also be zeroing in on why I am single. What is really going to bake your noodle later on is am I single because of my extensive Star Trek knowledge or have I developed this knowledge because of being single.

I don’t want to look under that rock.

The point is there isn’t one type of Star Trek fan and there isn’t one type of follower for a particular religion. On the surface this might sound good because, no matter what I do, I can’t be wrong.

Or can I?

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‘Wrong’ is highly subjective. And I think the only solution to any writing is to write the damn story – part of the problem is not wanting to cause offence.

In writing there is this idea of ‘sensitivity readers’ which is a reader from a particular background who reads a story and offers pointers in making it more believable and, to put it bluntly, tells the writer where they might have fucked up.

Fucking up is so easy.

Back to metaphor.

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The Big Bang Theory uses many references to Star Trek. However I, as a trekkie, sometimes notice things that don’t make sense – such as Howard’s apparent ignorance of a Romulan warbird – one of the most iconic star ships in TNG.

For my closing thoughts I will leave you with this. Religion is a broad church, no pun indented, and writing a character who is religious is not easy. They can come off as a stereotype if they are too strict and if they are too relaxed it might look like they are being made acceptable to a western audience. Chakotay, on Star Trek Voyager, is one of the worst examples of this. Rather than the writers picking a tribe and sticking with it Chakotay ends up being a hodgepodge of stereotypes.

For now I am just going to write the damn story and deal with all this later – although I will think about it quite loudly.

See you next time.

I just wanted to say that I have checked this post. I really have. Unfortunately my particular combination of dyslexia and dyspraxia makes it really hard for me to spot typos. Please enjoy and I’ll try not to make too many errors.

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