Still Haven’t Moved

I still haven’t moved into my shiny new flat. I’m waiting for people to talk to people to talk to my people. It is amazing how long this has taken!

While I’ve been waiting I’ve been considering what I might name my flat. I’ve got several ideas…

  1. Gallifrey – The Doctor’s homeworld in Doctor Who
  2. Enterprise – I don’t think I need to explain…
  3. TARDIS
  4. Seren Wen – Which is Welsh for White Star

I’ve had a few other ideas as well. One of them is to try and translate TARDIS, which is an acronym of course, into Welsh and use that. According to Google it comes out as: Amser a dimensional cymharol yn y gofod – which would be AADCYYG – which is not really pronounceable.

Maybe something will come to me when I move in. It is a funny thing buying a flat – I only saw it for about five minutes about 115 days ago and decided to buy based on that.

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The Name of the Wind – A Review

Three days ago I finished The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss. I wanted to try to review this book. This is a difficult thing because I didn’t like it.

I think a negative review requires more than a positive review. If a friend tells us that a book is great we might just read it on their recommendation. If something is good we don’t want too much information – we don’t want spoilers.  On the other hand if we are told a book is bad we’ll want details.

Speaking of spoilers there will be some in this…

I read this book after seeing a review, of sorts, on You Tube.

While I would love to share Little Book Owl’s infectious smiling love of this book I just didn’t get on with it. I’m not going to tell you not to read it though. I would never say that. Actually that’s not true there are definitely books that I would tell people to avoid. In fact I’d encourage you to read The Name of the Wind so you can explain it to me!

The Name of the Wind is a fantasy novel that revolves around the character of Kvothe. Kvothe is telling his life story to a chronicler. The book switches between first and third person narrative. This was quite effective. Kvothe talks in first person when telling us his story – third person is used for the in between parts in the present.

The story takes a little while to get going. When the narrative begins proper it is well told. We start with Kvothe with his family and then disaster. I don’t think I’m using hyperbole when I say that my jaw dropped and I brought my kindle closer. This part of the story was great and really ratcheted up the tension.

From this incident Kvothe is on his own. Money is continually an issue for him; however I never really felt the struggle. He always seemed to land on his feet. He always seemed to find a way to get money.

When he arrives at the university he negotiates his entry. He actually gets the masters to pay him rather than the other way around. Although the story shows us repeatedly that he is so much poorer than the other students he never seems held back by it. Some might say this makes him even more the hero but to me it was tedious. Since Kvothe seemed unphased by his setbacks they didn’t interest me either.

After getting to the university the story reads like someone going to school. He has his friends and enemies but to me none of them felt like complete people. There is very little characterisation, with a couple of exceptions, and all the Masters at the university basically merge together. The only thing to tell them apart is if they generally like Kvothe or dislike him.

It is perhaps the first person narrative that hinders the novel. It means we are unable to get into the minds of the other characters. We don’t even get much of a feeling for Kvothe. Even when he is whipped he just shrugs it off.

While I hesitate to make references to Harry Potter – The Name of the Wind is like The Philosopher’s Stone without Voldemort. I’m not saying that The Name of the Wind needs to have a villain. It is actually quite refreshing to see a fantasy novel without that. What I’m saying is there needs to be a pay off. Just some small sign that something has come together for the character. Even if we just here that he won a large amount of money – even if he loses it in the first chapter of the next book it would give some closure. It could be said that this lack of an ending is to be expected as this is the first in a trilogy; but generally each part in a trilogy has a satisfactory ending in and of itself. In the end Kvothe stops his narrative, there is some inexplicable disagreement between the Chronicler and Kvothe’s assistant, Bast, and the characters make for bed.

Maybe, sometime is the future, I might read book two. For now though I was disappointed with The Name of the Wind and have started reading The Book Thief.

Addendum: As I only have my eyes and my brain I can only give my opinion. I will admit that there were times when I was confused by this book. I had to read over a couple of sections. I got characters mixed up and I got taverns mixed up. So some of this may be me. When book three comes out I might attempt Name of the Wind again. Perhaps as one story it will work better.

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Vila: I’m entitled to my opinion.
Avon: It is your assumption that we are entitled to it as well that is irritating.
Blake’s 7: “Bounty”

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A Post So There is a Post

Just a quick update for today. I’m working on a book review, I finished The Name of the Wind today, but its not quite ready. It needs to be edited, it’s late, and I’m lazy. I wanted to post something so as to keep up with posting every week – especially as I’ve failed one of my other New Year’s resolutions – I didn’t submit a short story in January. I’m blaming this failure on the fact that I haven’t been able to move to my flat! My life is on hold – I think I’ll just go by Tibetan New Year!

See you next time.

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The End

I have been wrestling with purchasing a flat for the past few months. Yes months! It feels like everything that can go wrong has gone wrong with this purchase! The end is now in sight. I shall very shortly be moving to Pontypridd.

Pontypridd is a small town about 19 kilometers outside of Cardiff. Since Pontypridd is more of a Welsh area than Cardiff I am going to attempt to learn Welsh. I honestly don’t know if I will succeed, fail, or give up before I’ve truly given it a go.

Welsh is, I know, a strange language to want to learn. Almost everyone who speaks Welsh speaks English. From that point of view it could be seen as a waste of time; I feel a connection to Welsh though. When I take the train there is something nice about hearing the announcements in Welsh. I was thinking that I might try and listen to Welsh audio books and see how it goes.

I’ve also thought about doing the same thing for German. My TNG DVDs have a German option so I’ve watched a couple of episodes in German. So far all I can say with any certainty is ‘Der Weltraum – unendliche Weiten.’ – Space: The Final Frontier.

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The Other Day…

When I say that something happened ‘the other day’ I can mean anything from yesterday to a few weeks, or even years. ago. This is useful when writing this blog because the vagueness of that sentence can apply forever. I might see something one day, write about it the next, and schedule it to go out the following week and it can still be valid to say ‘the other day.’

So the other day I saw this video and just had to share it:

Dr. Tyson has an excellent way of putting across, sometimes very complex, ideas in a way that is funny and accessible. If science was approached in this way more in school it would be a very good thing. My memory of science is that it was never that interesting. I did enjoy it though because I had lessons with two good friends but I don’t remember it ever being truly fun.

A lot of science stuff, so basically the entire universe, I don’t really get. I used to think that an orbit was only used, in terms of Star Trek, to keep the planet from running away. I mean as opposed to having gravitational qualities and the like. See I’m proving I don’t understand it now. When I write science fiction I occupationally ask my brother for help, he has a head for these things, but sometimes all I really want is a simple answer. For instance I often just need to know if something is possible or not. However simple answers tend to be rare. As my brother once said there is a reason for simplicity to be illusive when writing science fiction… ‘It is rocket science.’

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Prompt – I Had Known Him For Years

While at university we were regularly given prompts. We were then told to write for a few minutes, usually about a quarter of an hour, and at the end some of us would read it out. Reading out to a class was the best things about university.

For the following piece I had the simple prompt ‘I had known him for years.’

I Had Known Him For Years

I had known him for years. I had never thought of him in a romantic context. At first it was the age difference, he was five years younger than me, sixteen when we first met. When people saw us together they used to ask if we were a couple – we said no and laughed at the idea.

So what was it that did it? How did we end up together? He wasn’t tall, dark, and handsome. More like plain, light, and average. His hair, though short, never quite seemed under control. His nose had a slight kink in it – a rugby accident. He did dress well – shirt, jacket, jeans, never ripped, and no t-shirts with pointless numbers or suggestive slogans

Okay I’ll admit it. It was the uniform! Something about the black jacket with the gold rings around the sleeve ends is very appealing. We did, after all, get married a few years after he joined the navy. Before you think of me as some uniform crazed slut – it was only him. I wasn’t hanging around at the docks awaiting the ships. Maybe we only got together, or stayed together, because of the uniform.

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The Doctor

One of my new year’s resolutions was to post regularly on this site. This means that some of the time I will be writing ahead of time. It feels like a bit of a cheat but there you are.

Speaking of time did you see the Christmas Day episode of Doctor Who? It was unfortunately not very good. The Doctor Who episodes have, in my opinion, become far to complicated recently. Classic Who tended to be small scale. The base under siege stories were often very good. However now the Doctor has saved not only the Earth, not just the galaxy, but the entire freaking universe! Now let’s be clear. I thought the pandorica story was excellent. The disaster was caused by the TARDIS and solved by the Doctor and in that way wrapped up quite neatly.

Generally though the smaller scale stories are better. Part of the reason for this is how the audience relates to the situation. Everyone can understand the fear of run from the monster. However when the threat is planet wide the solution is complicated, might involve techno babble, and it can be a little difficult to follow.

For Christmas my mum got the first four seasons of new Who. I had forgotten how great it was. The stories were great. The Doctor and Rose faced many creatures and the stories were tight. Of course they dabbled in more complicated plots, Army of Ghosts, but they were still wonderful.

Complicated stories can work, and do, but it takes a very skilled writer to make them work. My own novel is too complicated for me because of all the characters and settings. I’m starting to work out the kinks though. One show that does complicated very well is Sherlock. Naturally I’ve just finished watching Sherlock. I think that the writer of Sherlock should have a talk with the writer of Doctor Who and… oh wait…

When Doctor Who returns with Peter Capaldi I hope that Doctor Who will get back to its routs. It is at its best when it tells simple stories with a few key characters.

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The Pregnancy

Introduction

This was originally written for university. I don’t remember the exact context of why I wrote it but I believe the point of the exercise was to practice writing dialogue.

So just a short standalone piece.

The Pregnancy

“Pregnant,” Mathew repeated his daughter’s words. “How did that happen?”

“You want a diagram?” Haley said, looking with some amusement as her father paced across the room.

“Funny,” he said, falling into his chair. “You know what I meant.”

“We used contraception, guess we’re just in that one percent,” she said regretfully. Haley rose from her chair and knelt by her father, “I’m sorry to disappoint you.”

“You haven’t,” he said, though his eyes didn’t quite meet hers. “Are you going to keep it?”

Haley stood and walked across the room. She looked for a moment at the family picture above the fireplace; it showed her mother, father, herself and, her brother in her mother’s arms. When Haley had been born her parents had been ready. She wanted to have children, but was hoping to have had a little more time before it happened.

“Haley,” her father prompted.

“When I studied RE,” she began to pace, “abortion naturally came up. It is different however when it’s you.”

“Yes it is,” Mayhew said, standing. He placed his hands on her shoulders, this time his eyes did meed hers. “Tell me what you’re thinking.”

“In those debates, I always maintained that the choice had to be there, also that sometimes abortion is the kindest thing to do. If one does not have the resources to raise the child properly then…?”

“Then?”

“Sorry I don’t know how that sentence was supposed to end. Put it this way if, if money was no object I would have the baby. The university has child care facilities, or I could find a nursery or…”

“Shush,” her father said soothingly, taking her in an embrace. “So from a time perspective you think you could manage?”

“Yes.”

“What does Neil have to say?”

“Braking away from the hug she crossed her arms. “He’ll have made it to the hills by now.”

“I’m sorry.”

“I’m not,” Haley said as she moved away.

“Didn’t you love him?”

“I don’t even know any more,” she said as she slumped back into her chair. “Anyway he’s gone. He might touch base with me one day. I don’t think he’ll ever be daddy to my baby.”

“He might come back.”

Haley smiled. “Will you help me dad? All I need is the occasional baby sitter, maybe some money, I’ll pay you back, that sort of thing?”

“Of course.”

It was like an elastic band had snapped as he said that. Tears welled in her eyes and she fell towards her father. She held him in the embrace and thanked him.

“You’re welcome,” he said, “do any of your friends know?”

“No.”

“You going to tell them?”

“I think they’ll notice.” She managed a weak grin. “I guess I should.”

“You don’t need to do anything you don’t want to do. Have you thought about names?”

“No idea,” she said. “There’ll be nearly nine months to decide that. She covered her mouth with her hand and went to sit on the stairs, she didn’t know whether to smile or cry.

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The Promise

I just wanted to share this video with you. It’s a song by Emma Blackery, a British you tuber. I’ve been feeling a little down lately and the first line of this song, used as an alarm, was quite helpful this morning.

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The End of the Year

It’s been a few months since I posted here. There are a couple of reasons for that. Firstly this was a project for university, so I felt I should leave it to be marked, secondly I’ve been without internet for quite a while.

You see I’ve been on a roller-coaster of moving house. My house-mate, in who’s name the internet was in, moved out so no internet. That was at the end of October. I still haven’t moved!

I’m now at my parents, since the place I was renting sold, but hope to be in my flat very very soon! Thankfully my parents have internet!

I know it’s a first world problem and all that but being without internet is quite a tricky thing. I used my mobile, using the tethering option, and went to Starbucks. My poor little laptop wasn’t really up to the task. It was either that or Starbucks WiFi is a little on the slow side. So I paid a silly amount for internet!

At this time of year everyone, well some of us, make new years resolutions. I have in the past but never anything concrete. However 2014 is going to be a little different for me. It is the first year I feel I’ve been completely free.

I have a job, so don’t have to worry about money, I’ll have a flat, I’ve finished my MA, and basically they’ll be nothing I have to do except go to work!

Don’t get me wrong I’ve really enjoyed uni but it was a bit of a juggling act.

So here I some goals for the new year.

Well I was considering doing a numbered list but writing it like that looks too official.

In the new year I want to finally finish my ******** novel. I’ve gone back to it some many times and have become confused by my own plot but the end is in sight – it will be done!

I’ll try to write on here at least once a week. I’ll probably cheat by scheduling posts just in case I have a lack of time. Connected with that is a goal to continue with you tube. I did a smattering of badly thought out ramblings this year but I want to make that better. I’d love to have 100 subscribers by the end of the year. Finally I want to submit a short story to a competition or magazine every month.

On a more personal note I want to get fit and lose weight.

Happy New Year! We’ll see how long these resolutions last!

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